Sister Flowers response questions

In a certain way I have always been ashamed of my parents. I've never had my father in my life. He left, Im sure befor I was even born. To tell you the truth I dont even think he knows that I exists. Which is safe to say that it is my mothers fault because she couldnt even tell me who my father is. And I honetly feel that alot of mother's don't tell there childern who there fathers are to sheild them from harm, but I feel that she just honestly doesnt know. All through my life I've never considerd my mother much of anything. Even tho I get alot of my personalty from her. She abandon us, my sister Ardonyalasha, my brother Avery, and my self back when we were young. She really hasnt done much for us. We have been living with our grandparents ever since.

What is the thesis for your paper?

How one situation can change your life for ever.

List the main points you make in your paper.

What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation?

More supporting details

What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper?

More detales.

How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them? For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting?

I had two drafts and I wrote an outline in class that helped alot.

What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don’t think you got a good handle on?

Detaling was a problem for me.

What are most pleased with about this paper?

I think i relayed the story well.

• Why are you interested in these subjects?

Im interested in doing my Auntie because she dropped out of high school and went back to get college.

• What makes him/her interesting and unique?

She had a baby a defeated the odds to go back to school.

• What sort of questions would you ask and why?

What motivated her to go back when most people just give up.

• What sort of problems do you think may arise for Task Two?

This whole interviewing thing is not my style. lol

• What do you anticipate? Why?

Learning more about my Aunt, Because these are very intamite questions that she doesnt really talk about.

• What questions do you have for Task Two?

Why did you drop out?
What made you go back?
Did you have a person or reason that motivated you?

My Grandparents

I feel that I have had plenty of good times with my grandparents. They have truly been my mother and Father. They have raised me ever since I was 4 years old. They have taught me wrong from right and bad from good. They've always been there when ever I needed them. My grandmother and I are very different she’s more like my sister. She’s very strong weld but she can be very nice. Sometime we butt heads but she’s always had my back. When ever I need something I can always count on my Gmal to come through for me. Now this leads me to my Gpal. My grandfather is my absolute most favorite person in my life. Other then the fact that we look just alike, we vibe so well. We have this collection that cant be broken. Where like joined at the hip. He knows what I’m thinking when I’m thinking it and why I’m thinking it. We truly have a special bond. I cried so much when I found out that he was in the hospital my freshman year in college. So much so that I took the whole second semester off just to love him up and nurse him back into good health. So now I’m back at Mo West finishing everything off because I know that this is where he wants me to be.

My Introduction

I want to start my Introduction saying that I love to write. I love the feeling of me and my words intertwined to make a story told by my lips, with my imagination, and nobody can tell it but me. I love taking my readers on a journey through my mind...through my soul. To be one, to dance with the words like they've known each other for years. Like its there best friend, there soul mate. As you can tell I’m clearly in my feelings. But that's ok because writing is my outlet, my pen, paper, and I are all I need. They allow me to open up my world to my readers. To EXPRESS my self. let everything go that I've been holding in.

My name is Atlana Breon Johnson, I am 19 years old. I am from Kansas City, Missouri. I graduated from Northeast High School class of 2009. I was very active in school I was a football manager, I was Captain of the Cheerleading team, stating center for the girls Basketball team, and I was part of the poetry club. I loved all four years of high school i really enjoyed them a lot.

I was raised in a two parent home, but I was not raised by my mother or my father. I was raised by my grandparents. My sister, brother, and I were raised together by our grandparents because my mother was not that responsible as a parent to care for us. I’m very happy we were raised by our grandparents; they are the love of my life. We just celebrated there 40th anniversary on August 27th. They care about all there grandkids equally but I think we have a special place in there hearts.

Well that’s enough about me. I hope this year brings new things to the table. New stories to read new adventures to go on, new people to meet, and more Novel possibilities!

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