Monday, September 6, 2010
My Grandparents
I feel that I have had plenty of good times with my grandparents. They have truly been my mother and Father. They have raised me ever since I was 4 years old. They have taught me wrong from right and bad from good. They've always been there when ever I needed them. My grandmother and I are very different she’s more like my sister. She’s very strong weld but she can be very nice. Sometime we butt heads but she’s always had my back. When ever I need something I can always count on my Gmal to come through for me. Now this leads me to my Gpal. My grandfather is my absolute most favorite person in my life. Other then the fact that we look just alike, we vibe so well. We have this collection that cant be broken. Where like joined at the hip. He knows what I’m thinking when I’m thinking it and why I’m thinking it. We truly have a special bond. I cried so much when I found out that he was in the hospital my freshman year in college. So much so that I took the whole second semester off just to love him up and nurse him back into good health. So now I’m back at Mo West finishing everything off because I know that this is where he wants me to be.
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HI Atlana,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing. I can see that both grandparents mean a good deal to you specifically your grandfather. I enjoyed the most the moment you tell us that he was in the hospital because it is a telling detail about you and you establish the assertion (e.g. I took the second semester off to nurse him back to good health). As for your grandmother though, I would suggest looking only at one person (say your grandfather). You suggest that you can always count on your grandmother. As supporting detail, can you tell us how? Establish that assertion. Use your own experiences as supporting detail.