Sunday, November 14, 2010

  • What is the thesis for your paper?
The Thesis for my paper getting over people that doubt you.
  • List the main points you make in your paper.
The main points I make in my paper are, over coming doubter's. Making it even though nobody thinks you will.
  • What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation?
To use more personal details and not just generals.

  • What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper?
Ms. Chastains paper helped me start my paper off and gave me a good example of what she was looking for in Task III 

  • How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them? For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting?
I like to type on the key board, save it, then come back and work on it alittle more. I like to do my paper in my bed but since i dont have a laptop right now im stuck with typing it in the labs around campus.

  • What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don’t think you got a good handle on?
I would definatly make it longer give more attention to the paper.

  • What are most pleased with about this paper?
I like the fact that I put alot of details in the paper, and i also ineluded situations from my life of education.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Atlana,

    You did a good job with this paper; however, what I would have like to have seen is the incorporation of Jordan's essay early on. This is part of the foundation of this paper. Remember the readers haven't read the essay, so we need to summarize it fully in order to understand the similarities you draw from it.

    Ms. C

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